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由于雅思口语写作是属于语言输出的主观性考试,很难有像阅读听力那样的一个标准答案供你自我诊断自我总结。下面小编就和大家分享雅思写作口语批改很重要,来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作口语批改很重要

批改的重要性

批改的重要性无须多言,以大部分雅思考生写作口语5.5分左右的水平,面对自己的答案/表现,除了能知道自己表现得糟糕,跟平时差不多,或者比平时发挥似乎流畅些之外,大约也讲不出个所以然来。所以,一个更高水平的人的点评,指出答案的诸多毛病以及些许亮点,并提供一些修改的建议,最重要的是为以后的提高指出方向,就显得弥足珍贵,像我看到的一些优秀的批改,可能你的答案才一页纸,点评写出了三页纸;你的答案才2分钟,别人的点评却有10分钟。可以说练习一篇+精修一篇+再自我修改+再批改,这种组合产生的效果比你练10篇都要好。

批改的内容有哪些

无论是写作还是口语,批改的方向都是按照各自的考试评分标准表来的,雅思官方给了那么详细的评分标准,资深老师可以严格的按照评分标准一条条的捋。语法,词汇各种细节别想跑,逻辑思路是否清晰,内容上是否言之有物,当然,口语的话,还有一项最麻烦的发音。我看到的精修版写作,一篇文章被指出30+的错误/不当,如果在考试下,基本就是5.5分下的水平。

所以,不是高人给你批改,你很难知道自己的问题在哪里。批改就是一面镜子,照出自己的不足。

个人体会:所以,雅思写作和口语,能有几次宝贵的批改,是突破自己的瓶颈的最好方法。不要省略掉了这个环节,虽然自己对照着范文反复研读,反复写,是可以提升,但一个人永远有自己的文风,别人的范文你不可能学得来,也不应该照搬。那么,在自己的写作习惯下的文章的问题,只有在自己的文章里才能看得出来。一个优秀的批改老师,就是帮你看出你的写作习惯下有什么可以改进的地方,而不是让你去模仿他人。

雅思口语part1答案解析:Clothes

1. What kind of clothes do you often wear in daily life?

In my normal, everyday life, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt, perhaps a skirt or a dress in summer. It really depends. But usually quite casual clothes – clean and presentable, but casual attire, normally.

2. Is there any difference between the clothes you wear on weekends and weekdays?

Perhaps there’s a bit of a difference, yes. During the week I tend to focus more on wearing conventional styles, because I have to go to work and must look a bit smarter. On weekends I tend to be more laid-back and wear more casual clothes, perhaps even slightly more informal clothes. For example if I go to a party or something I might dress up in heels and sort of more striking-looking dresses, which I don’t tend to wear in the office.

3. Is there any color you dislike when buying clothes?

I don’t really like yellow. I don’t think this colour suits me. Also pastel shades don’t really suit me, either. I prefer plain colours, subdued colours for work, and perhaps more bold colours if I go out on the weekend with friends.

雅思口语part2&3答案解析:有用的一本书

Describe a book you read that you found useful.

You should say:

What it is

When and where you read it

Why you think it is useful

And explain how you feel about this book

A book I found exceedingly useful in my studies was quite a boring book actually, I have to say. It was a book on English grammar, by a man called Michael Swan, a famous grammarian. It was given to me by a foreign teacher at university. It’s a hugely useful book, as it is organized and laid out in quite a logical way, quite different to other grammar books I’ve seen. It’s really easy to find what you want in it, and the explanations and examples are incredibly clear. I used it a lot when I was writing essays, actually, because I was often unsure how to use certain aspects of English grammar, or in doubt if I was using them correctly. For example, the use of “would” to be “used to” is something that used to confuse me, so I remember looking up “would” in the index of the book and finding numerous examples of the usage, not just the conditional usage, but its usage in terms of meaning “used to”, or “usually” in the past tense. From the examples in the book I quickly grasped the difference in the different uses of “would” in the English language. This is just one example of many times I’ve used this book to check or clarify English language use in my studies. I feel very happy that my teacher gave me this book as a leaving present when I moved on to another year, and it has helped me immensely. I’ve often lent it to classmates and colleagues and they always say that it’s the best grammar book they’ve seen. It’s not cheap to buy though, so I try to look after it and make sure that whoever I lend it to, gives it me back!

Part3

1. What kind of books do young people like to read nowadays?

Young people tend to read a lot of adventure stories I think. Well, it really depends on the age, really. I’m talking about teenagers. I think teenagers like the more modern adventure heroes like the characters in Marvel comics and films. There are quite a few stories of this nature which are popular. Harry Potter has become internationally hugely famous too, and a lot of young people, young people of all ages in fact, have got really into Harry Potter, both in the original English language versions and also in the Chinese translations. I’d say these probably are the most popular books for young people today. They capture all the elements young people like: adventure, school drama, magic and fantasy!

2. Some people believe that if children read more books, they may become more successful in the future. What’s your opinion?

I think that reading is definitely good for young people as it not only expands their vocabulary in their own language and in a foreign language they’re studying, but also helps to improve their understanding of people, human interactions, relationships and situations in daily life. Reading is something that also helps to focus the mind, improve concentration and self-discipline, and so there are a combination of reasons why I think that reading could contribute to people becoming more successful in the long-term.

3. What’s the value of museums?

Museums are useful to a degree, I think. It really depends. They can be incredibly boring too. I think that if you visit a museum with a group or class from school and you have some tasks to accompany the visit, things to look out for, things to read and do little projects on, then they can be useful and educational. However, if you just walk around a museum aimlessly looking at artefacts and relics, it can be quite tedious, especially if you have no idea what you’re looking at or don’t have a guide or can’t be bothered to read a bit about what you’re seeing. I think the greatest value in museums is when they are designed to be interesting, have interactive exhibits and make learning about history fun and entertaining.

4. Should museums be replaced by the Internet?

Absolutely not. We cannot do everything in our lives online. That actually kills our focus and imagination. Museums are physical spaces that we can walk around with other people, and see things directly, not just on a screen. I would always promote the improvement of museums and not the replacement of them with online versions. It’s important that we keep real artefacts and relics from the history of the world in museums, also to preserve them. And letting the general public go in and see these on display is a lot more meaningful than simply putting these things on show online. However advanced society becomes, seeing a famous or important historical object in real life is much more interesting than seeing it in the form of a photo or video on a website.




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